UX Writing Challenge - Day Eight


Scenario: The user is a casual music fan and (on occasion) goes to live concerts. They have a music player app on their phone.

Challenge: Tell the user that one of their favorite bands is playing live in their town. How would you compel them to want to go?

Headline: 30 characters max
Body: 45 characters max
Button(s): 25 characters


Master Peace Is In Town!

Master Peace is coming to YES on 23rd May. Fancy it?


My thoughts

So I've been listening to Master Peace's How to Make a Master Peace a lot recently. It's pretty good. I was trying to think how a message such as this might get me to buy a ticket.

Not much to say here, other than I'm quite happy with this. Particularly 'fancy it.' It reads a lot like how I'd pitch the gig to a friend.



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